A day so true,
I could hear the
wind as it blew,
Past me,
whistling in my ears,
It’s not about
my tears, nor is it about those beers.
A day so weird,
When I asked
you, you just sneered,
An answer was
what I couldn’t get,
Our future was
something on which I wouldn’t bet.
Hand in hand we
had walked,
All night long
we had talked,
Our words melted
into nothingness,
It caused me
trouble, a lot of stress.
The days
lengthened, the nights so long,
All I heard was
the phoenix’s song,
The sorrow swept
me off my legs,
But the pain didn’t
drown in all of those pegs.
Bottles empty, I
looked for some more,
Then I fell down
and began to snore,
A nap it wasn’t,
blackout it was,
You weren’t the
answer, you were the cause.
A void so huge,
the darkness undefined,
You ruined the
image of life; it ceased to be refined,
The dreams all
stopped, and the thoughts all died,
I knew I had to
take cover, I knew I had to hide.
I watched you go
far far away,
You just had
gone, another trouble at bay,
I had been
played, made to look like a clown,
I just laughed
at myself; baby, as you shot me down.
This is really well written.
ReplyDeleteEmotions expressed in the best of words possible...
I liked the line the most i.e. "You weren't the answer, you were the cause"
Glad you liked it Lancelot :)
DeleteVery powerful feelings, suppressed (?) ... and then brought out in verse.
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt the emotions Sir :)
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