Sunday, September 1, 2013

Voh Haseen Pal



Nahi samajh paye voh,
Unn ankahe lafz ko,
Nahi jaanch paye voh,
Uss dil ke jazbat ko,
Kaid uss choti-si soch mein,
Reh gaye voh saare sapne.

Beetta chala gaya voh pal,
Aur tair gaye voh saare lamhen,
Zindagi ho gayi suni si,
Unn dabbe hue khwabon se,

Waqt ka ajeeb silsila na hua tha khatam,
Aur izahar hua unn yaadon ka jab,
Tab khil uthi chehre pe aisi ek ronak,
Aur ussi mein dikh gaye sabko,
Voh haseen pal, voh haseen pal, voh haseen pal.


PS: This is my second try at writing something in Hindi, so please put in your valuable comments. You can read my other post here.

18 comments:

  1. Voh Haseen Pal..This is also so Haseen..Good one Karan..:-)

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    1. Thank you Harsha...glad you liked it..:)

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  2. Aur ussi mein dikh gaye sabko, iss line mein kafi kuch chippa hai. Liked it Karan.

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  3. wah kya baat hai .. ! u wrote pretty good in the second attempt itself :)

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    1. Thanks Ankur, I'm glad you liked it..:)
      Keep visiting...

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