Saturday, May 10, 2014

First Words

They lay stationary on the floor, her hand curled protectively around him.

As the door creaked open, she jumped to her feet as Anne frolicked in.

“Happy Mother’s Day Mommy,” she shouted as Richard looked on.

He gurgled and with a small pause said his first word, “Mom”.

Her cheeks moistened on the double surprise.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

14 comments:

  1. that's so sweet!

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  2. that's a short and sweet post :) all the best for the wow

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  3. Very well-written take on the prompt!

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    1. Glad you liked it :)
      Keep visiting..!!

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  4. Sweet one Karan on Mother's Day and enjoyed reading it:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/05/11/wow-longing-for-moms-love

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