Even though I don’t believe in Him,
I feel He’s there-somewhere,
Waiting for me, protecting me,
Wishing well for me,
Doing all the good in my life,
And that makes me feel happy, actually elated.
I don’t blame him for the wrong,
‘Cause those were my deeds,
The times I did not listen to Him,
But He made me learn,
And I hope I do not make those mistakes again…
Great going man! Keep up the good work :)
ReplyDeleteohhh wowow!! ur existence as a person does matter and your thoughts matter too... wld love to read more and more:)))
ReplyDeleteHe is always there....
ReplyDeleteNice and Intense lines..and yes we learn from our Mistakes and someone is always there to make us realize that..
ReplyDeleteNice composition.Amazing play with words.
ReplyDeleteNice Karan, you have got the flair and the talent.
ReplyDeletethis brought tears to my eyes... all the writing I have done, pales next to this one. God bless you
ReplyDeleteThank you...
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