Saturday, November 16, 2013

Amnesia



She had seen that tattoo before! If only she could remember where.

Seeing her walk in, the man with the tattoo, her husband, stood up.

She stretched her brain for information, as he came to her.

"Thank God, you are safe honey. Oh, i love you so much."

All she asked was, "Who are you.”

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

28 comments:

  1. [ Smiles ] It has a nice dreamy finish to it, Karan.

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  2. Wow...short and unexpected...nice take on the prompt :)

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    1. Thank you Ma'am...:)
      Glad you liked it...:D
      Keep visiting..!!

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  3. Very Nicely Done Kara..The last Line is the Ultimate.. :)

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  4. ohhh last line does it for me! Perfect end!

    Richa

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  5. Just three words can turn lives upside down ;)

    Defiant Princess
    http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/

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    1. Glad you got the feeling Brendan..:)
      Keep visiting..!!

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  7. Short and precise to the prompt....well written!

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  8. precise and heartbreaking...well written

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    1. Thank you Ma'am..:)
      Glad you liked it...:D

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  10. this was realy good karan...u hav a knack for these micro fictions.

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    1. Thanks brother...:)
      Keep visiting da..!!

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    1. Will give a try for sure...:) :D
      Keep visiting..!!

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