She
had seen that tattoo before! If only she could remember where.
Seeing her walk in, the man with the
tattoo, her husband, stood up.
She stretched her brain for information,
as he came to her.
"Thank God, you are safe honey. Oh,
i love you so much."
All she asked was, "Who are you.”
[ Smiles ] It has a nice dreamy finish to it, Karan.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir...:)
DeleteWow...short and unexpected...nice take on the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ma'am...:)
DeleteGlad you liked it...:D
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Very Nicely Done Kara..The last Line is the Ultimate.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Harsha...:)
Deleteohhh last line does it for me! Perfect end!
ReplyDeleteRicha
Just three words can turn lives upside down ;)
ReplyDeleteDefiant Princess
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Well said Ma'am...:)
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Subtly frightening...
ReplyDeleteGlad you got the feeling Brendan..:)
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Very interesting !!
ReplyDeleteFlashbacks
Thank you Sir...:)
DeleteWow.. :)
ReplyDeleteShort and precise to the prompt....well written!
ReplyDeleteprecise and heartbreaking...well written
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short and nice story. WOW post!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ma'am..:)
DeleteGlad you liked it...:D
this was realy good karan...u hav a knack for these micro fictions.
ReplyDeleteGood attempt bro...
ReplyDeleteThanks brother...:)
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loved it. try writing for TTT :)
ReplyDeleteWill give a try for sure...:) :D
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