Wiping
sweat from under his characteristic red hair, he watched the figure materialize
in the pot.
Hair
tousled and round spectacles gleaming, he touched the lightning bolt- a divine
summons.
The
pale captive with a slit-like nose trembled with fear as the boy walked forward
in his red robes.
The
Chosen One had risen again.
PS:
I don’t know what struck me when I wrote this; but I had started off to do
something completely different from what is seen above.
PPS:
Recognition of all the characters is open, and I hope the descriptions have
turned out to be clear. :P
nice job.
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Are you attempting a Harry Potter fanfic??? While the descriptions were good, the "red" hair is a Weasley trait... So, that sort of threw me off track a little bit... Or is Ron the chosen one in the parallel universe?
ReplyDeleteYes it was Harry Potter. The scene was the one at the end of part 4...when Voldy returns...
DeleteRon was to be the faithful servant (Pettigrew) and Harry was the one who rises...and Harry still remains the Chosen One...
Nice post..Would love to hear the full story someday
ReplyDelete:D :D potterhead..! me too..goblet of fire , eh?
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Ah this was a nice take.... U can make a short story out of it
ReplyDeleteWill surely give it a try soon...:)
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