The clock chimed, and at that precise moment,
the crowd stood up as one. Knowing this little ritual perfectly, the two old
men stood up on the first chime. Sitting next to each other on the first wooden
bench of the congregation, the men had followed this routine for the last 10
years. On this day, they walked in with their canes, looking a lot older than
the year before; their years pronounced by the wrinkles and the ever thinning
white crop of hair. They closed their eyes intently and prayed in their mind,
for peace. And they thanked the Lord for whatever he had done for them. Even
after 10 long years, this is what they did.
As the crowd started thinning, the men started
walking as well- slowly shuffling towards the warm welcome sun of September.
Plodding towards the nearby lake, they sat down, their breaths heavy and the
sound of their breath treacherously loud.
"It’s a decade Gad. I don’t know what made
me run that day and I wasn’t even gunning for a medal."
"You should be thankful Shaul. It’s just
us now. All the rest are gone."
"I’m ever thankful to the mice which allowed
me to survive that ghastly night."
Shaul started coughing terribly, and
continued," I guess even I won’t make it till next year."
"I’ll be damned if I will."
An evil silence ensued as the men pondered in
the present. Cracking the ice, Shaul said," I can’t believe it’s so long.
It feels like it was just yesterday. I can still feel the pain in my legs as
the gravel on the path tore the skin, and let my body fluids slip out, red and
slow. I can hear the soft echo of the guns chirping, and the cries of our
colleagues, as they were slowly consumed by the flames in the Sikorsky. It
still feels so similar to me."
"I agree with you Gad. But we survived. I don’t
know how, and nor do you." Stopping for breath, he went on," I can
now agree to whatever the press said about us in those days. You remember the
title they had used for us?"
"The Survivors. I think we did that name
justice."
The silence enlarged as the men dissolved deep
into their thought, and reminisced those moments again. It was so clear in
their weak eyes, that they could have argued it was real. And the reel of real
life came on, as time rolled back and transferred them to that niche of their
past. That gargoyle which had made them value signs, and had made them respect
an entity we called God. And along with this, they remembered the fear of the
moment. The guns blazing, and the cracks and the blasts and the booms and the
screams and the screeches. There had been nothing they could do to help their
friends out, but they had escaped, and they had survived.
From the distance, a shriveled figure
approached them. Walking with a metal cane, the man looked completely fit, and
not in any pain as well. Surprised with this, the pair started to get up, and
to leave the place unnoticed.
“I’d not do that if I were you Ali. You will
agree with me if you see the glints at 9 o’clock, and 3 o’clock,” the old man
said in an American accent, and tipped his hat to show off his shock of brown
hair under the inconspicuous white wig.
“I did notice them briefly but I ignored them. Now
will you say who you are,” said ‘Gad’. His voice had changed from the feeble,
wavering voice to one with a husky young drawl to it. Along with this, the
pronounced German accent had changed to a weird accent, lined with the
undertone of the Middle East.
“Stop moving or I’ll blow your intestines over
the place. Just tell us your name and your business with us. And if I’d be you,
I wouldn’t delay in that. You can check things out at 12’o clock and 6’o
clock,” said Shaul, his tone changed drastically as well.
“Well well. I wouldn’t make too much of your
empty threats, as its 10 years since you both left the field. And Sheikh,
remove your hand from under you tweed jacket.
These snipers I’ve brought with me do not like their subjects twitching
and moving.
“We have some secret business with you
regarding that day. I hope you remember what I’m talking about. And it’s too
big a secret to talk about in a park on a park bench. I’m now going to walk to a
waiting car, and I expect you to do the same. I don’t want you both dying under
weird circumstances, eh?”
He got up and nodded. A car pulled up to the
sidewalk, just opposite the bench. Before leaving, he continued.
“Regarding what you did a decade earlier, in
Munich, I’d have thought your names would be a bit different. Nice thought to
take on the identities of the wrestler and the runner, who were probably killed
by you. And regarding the job, it’s something you both are very good at-
survival. But this time, you will be stealing someone’s life to survive.”
With this mysterious dialogue, the ‘young’ old
man started walking to the car. Ali and Sheikh looked at each other with a grim
expression and started following. Reaching into his pocket, Ali removed a
handkerchief to wipe a bead of sweat trickling down his brow, as the sniper in
the distance fingered his trigger hungrily.
Oh Even I was feeling the Tension reading this all the way Karan...Nice Composition
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Wow Karan! Very gripping narration, though I liked the first part better (words, syntax) Was this result of a writing prompt? or a part of a thriller novel you are writing?
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*Too many questions :D
This was a topic I had in my English paper. I previously had no plans on continuing it, but now I think I should be taking the story ahead...:D
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well, you have a great command over vocab...
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