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Saturday, October 19, 2013

Wandering Spirit

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He opened the door and looked at the petite woman sleeping on the bed. His eyes shifted to the little child in the cradle.

Gliding to the armchair, he sat down and reminisced his past as a trickle flowed down his cheeks.

The creaks roused the lady. She screamed on seeing the empty swaying chair.
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22 comments:

  1. RatOctober 19, 2013 at 11:33 AM

    good one!

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  2. suraj mahantOctober 19, 2013 at 11:47 AM

    Very haunting

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    1. Karan SampatOctober 20, 2013 at 10:23 AM

      Glad you felt like that Sir...:)
      Keep visiting..!!

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  3. AnonymousOctober 19, 2013 at 11:58 AM

    These days your are writing more of Horror... :)
    Nice Spooky lines.. :D

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    1. Karan SampatOctober 20, 2013 at 10:25 AM

      Thank you Harsha...:)
      The horror writing is just a phase maybe..;) :)

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  4. Poonam KhandujaOctober 19, 2013 at 7:51 PM

    Mysterious To The Core.
    Made for a chilly read, great attempt!

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  5. K.A. AcharyaOctober 19, 2013 at 10:46 PM

    Awesome. These are great opening lines.

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  6. AnkionthemoveOctober 20, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    Seriously,great opening lines,I thought somebdy was thre

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  7. Akash GovindarajanOctober 20, 2013 at 10:00 AM

    Oh my....a great one !!

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  8. AnkitaOctober 20, 2013 at 11:01 AM

    Hi!
    touching..very nicely written :)

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    1. Karan SampatOctober 21, 2013 at 10:29 AM

      Hey Ankita...
      Thanks..Glad you liked it...:)
      Keep visiting..!!

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  9. An Indian WriterOctober 20, 2013 at 1:04 PM

    Nice. The title kind of gave the game away though :)

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    1. Karan SampatOctober 21, 2013 at 10:31 AM

      Ahh...Will take care to use better titles next time sir..;)
      PS: I'm bad with them.
      Glad you liked it sir..:)
      Keep visiting..!!

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  10. UnknownOctober 21, 2013 at 11:14 AM

    Gosh that was in-your-face-spooky and unexpected!
    Good one!

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  11. Renard MoreauOctober 26, 2013 at 11:06 PM

    [ Smiles ] This is a rather lovely poem!

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  12. Ritesh AgarwalNovember 4, 2013 at 2:07 AM

    quite spooky...though the story looks a bit unclear as to the crime he committed but the spook factor was very high...

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