Saturday, October 19, 2013

Wandering Spirit

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He opened the door and looked at the petite woman sleeping on the bed. His eyes shifted to the little child in the cradle.

Gliding to the armchair, he sat down and reminisced his past as a trickle flowed down his cheeks.

The creaks roused the lady. She screamed on seeing the empty swaying chair.

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    1. Glad you felt like that Sir...:)
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  2. These days your are writing more of Horror... :)
    Nice Spooky lines.. :D

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    1. Thank you Harsha...:)
      The horror writing is just a phase maybe..;) :)

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  3. Mysterious To The Core.
    Made for a chilly read, great attempt!

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  4. Awesome. These are great opening lines.

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  5. Seriously,great opening lines,I thought somebdy was thre

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  6. Hi!
    touching..very nicely written :)

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    1. Hey Ankita...
      Thanks..Glad you liked it...:)
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  7. Nice. The title kind of gave the game away though :)

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    1. Ahh...Will take care to use better titles next time sir..;)
      PS: I'm bad with them.
      Glad you liked it sir..:)
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  8. Gosh that was in-your-face-spooky and unexpected!
    Good one!

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  9. [ Smiles ] This is a rather lovely poem!

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  10. quite spooky...though the story looks a bit unclear as to the crime he committed but the spook factor was very high...

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