Saturday, October 12, 2013

Unknown Presence

Vroom! The engine had revved fastidiously, only to give a loud screech and a bang.
He remembered her murmurs as she left. She was gone in the flames.
The wind howled, a wolf whined, and the door slammed shut with a boom.
An invisible hand held his shoulder, and he screamed with anger, and fear.


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda

20 comments:

  1. For some reason I felt she was a bike :P :P

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  2. Scary it was. Nice short attempt.

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  3. Psycho horror...one of my fav genres...do read Edgar Allan Poe

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  4. Different idea...am a horror movie buff...loved it :)

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  5. Sounds cool...
    I would recommend you to try writing it as a long post with some more thoughts...will be an awesome post...
    PS: if you do so...ping me personally(in case if I miss it) ;)

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    1. Will surely try something out..and I will make sure to notify you...;) :D
      Keep visiting..!! :D

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  6. Wow... A fast change of sounds and moments and expressions...Nice :)

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    1. Thank you Sir...Glad you liked it...:)
      Keep visiting..!!

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