Saturday, October 26, 2013

Who Is There?

I wake in the morning,
Look through the window,
A gust blows in my ear,
I wonder who is there.

I stand at the dressing table,
Wiping my face,
A silhouette appears behind me,
I wonder who is there.

I tread the deserted road,
I hear footsteps behind me,
I look behind to see no one,
I wonder who is there.

I lay in bed at night,
Alone in the darkness,
The window creaks open,
I wonder who is there.

Whispers and murmurs heard,
Shadows and silhouettes moving with stealth,
We don’t know who lives with us,
We just wonder who is there.


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. We give out themes for creative writing each weekend for Indian bloggers.

22 comments:

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    Shashikant

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  2. Woah!!! Loved it... I think you are improving a lot... :)
    Simple and yet there is something in it...
    Keep it up...

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    1. Thank you brother...:D :)
      All your help..;)

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  3. Simple n effective. Very well written :)

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  5. After reading this even I wonder who is there.. ;)
    May be it is our Inner Voice.. :D
    Nice Read Karan.. :D

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    1. Haha..;)
      There are lots of options which seem possible..!!
      Thanks Harsha..:)

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  6. A very heart warming piece of poetry :)

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  7. Truly WOW, Karan!
    Even I wonder the same! :)

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  8. Simple and warm.. I liked it :)

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  9. A wonderful piece.
    You can visit mine at http://geetasfile.blogspot.in/2013/10/look-gama-is-here.html

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    1. Glad you liked it Ma'am..:)
      Will surely read your piece as well..
      Keep visiting..!!

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