The
roar echoed across the Estadio do Maracana and resonated across the whole of
Rio. It was pandemonium as the players walked onto the field and took their
positions. It was a very big moment for the nation, and adrenaline and excitement
levels were at their peak.
Holding
up my pass for the final, I crossed the street and slowly went to my place. There
was the whistle, and the game was on. The crowd cheered and jeered, and hooted
and booed as the game progressed; the reactions getting more and more
pronounced as the clock ticked on.
“Hey
kid, you enjoying the game,” the man next to me asked, as I turned towards him.
“Kid?
What do you mean old man? I’m thir…”
“Teen,”
he completed.
I
looked at my hands, and noticed that the scars from training and my tattoos
were missing.
“What
the…” I swore as a whistle sounded and one of the Selecao fell to the ground
clutching his ankle.
The
players formed a huddle as one of them walked in slowly, looking a bit
disoriented and shaken. His eyes bore into mine, and I saw a twinkle of
recognition.
“You
lost somewhere kid? Look there,” my neighbor called out to me as he shook me
from the shoulders.
I
screamed as I lost my footing and fell to the floor.
“Hey
Ped, you okay idiota?”
“Ow,”
I said rubbing my head on the floor beside my bed as Neymar looked at me with a
curious look in his eyes.
“Just
a bad dream tonto el culo,” I continued.
We
both rushed to our feet as the coach stuck his head in through the door.
“Team
meeting in 15,” he said and vanished.
The
dream got lost in memory as the game plans fit themselves hastily in my mind.
“This
is it boys. The moment we have all been waiting for. We can and we will do
this. Todo lo mejor, mis hijos,” said our coach as we walked out of the
dressing room and onto the field.
I
was exhilarated as the whistle sounded. It wasn’t a dream after all.
The
crowd was going berserk as the clock ticked on, and the ball jumped from one
end to the other. All off a sudden, the whistle sounded as Thiago Silva went
down clutching his ankle. We ran to form a huddle around, and to catch our
breaths.
The
dream came back to me and I noticed the similarities in the moment. I looked
around, and there was absolute silence. The shouts vanished, and it felt as
though I was alone. Not alone, there was someone with me- a boy in the stands.
I turned, and looked, my eyes staring right into his, absorbing his entire
stature. A wave of recognition passed through me as Neymar threw the ball at me,
and I lost my footing in the wet grass. In the background, I noticed someone
else dressed in yellow as well- white haired and smiling.
“Pedro,
you alright darling? It’s time to get ready. We need leave for the final,” my wife
said as I looked around, disoriented.
I
ran a hand through my white locks as I pulled on a yellow Selecao jersey.
PS:
This is not what I had entirely in mind. It’s a first trial at something like
this, so please put in your comments at the bottom so I can do better at such
stuff.
PPS:
Personally, I didn’t like it as much as some of my older posts.
I like this more than some of your older posts. Either I am mad, or you have just created something intelligently convoluted and goosebumpy. I'd say believe it to be the latter. :D
ReplyDeleteWork on the style, better yourself and the inception will be complete. ;)
Sure ma'am...will work on this and try to get better :) :D
DeleteThanks Adi da :D
DeleteYou could try something like this too, you know..!!
It's really good man, you have successfully managed to confuse and then bring your reader to the conclusion that it as either deja vu or Leonardo di Caprio having a bad dream.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brendan. It was somewhat the latter, and not deja vu, because it was just a single person at 3 different times of life. Like, that was my aim when I wrote this...
Deletewow superb. i always like this kinda looped stories. and this one is jus brilliant. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Meera :)
DeleteThis is good...You managed to keep me looped..:)
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt that way Ma'am :)
DeleteI Liked it Karan.. To be frank it left in a daze.. Very experimental.. I am not sure why u hesitated in putting this up.. May this be the first of many.. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteYes, there are times when the one who does the experiment isn't sure about the self, and this was one of the times. Will surely try to better this genre :D :)
DeleteIsn't this the same post you sent over to Sid and Sakshi over mail?
ReplyDeleteBrilliant it is, and as good as any of your previous efforts, Karan! :)
Yes Ma'am, it is the same one :)
DeleteThank you Ma'am, glad you liked it :D