The
words you screamed,
On
that day, I remember,
Still
very ripe in memory,
As
jagged as ice,
And
as sharp as a knife,
They
pierced me,
Through
and through,
You
stood and watched,
As
the wound widened,
My
soul bleeding,
My
heart pleading,
I
wished for you,
A
shadow walking away.
Wow I can feel your hurt through these words. Lovely lines, enjoyed reading them
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DeleteYou penned the feeling really well :)
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Words ..when they really hit ..we feel the deepest pain..nicely penned Karan.. :-)
ReplyDeleteYes Ma'am..very true...
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Wow! I mean it really touched me deep inside...the last line was amazing!
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DeleteHeart touching lines..Well penned :)
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Short, yet powerful! :)
ReplyDeleteWell written, Karan :)
Thank you Aayesha..glad you liked it :D :)
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